looking for some constructive crit on a new mix...

[jivewhiteboy]

I've never worked on a song like this before, so I could use some other ears. I really want to make this the best it can be, so let me know.

http://www.facebook.com/home.php#/pages ... 828?ref=ts

just go to this page and listen to the song "richard."

[joninc]

sounds pretty cool man - i'd say maybe it'd be cool to hear the acoustic darkened up a tad and brought up and more to the right to balance out the hihats on the left. i think it could add some nice movement to the tune - it's a little too focussed on the middle synth. i'd pull that down a few db and blend it in a little more.

[jivewhiteboy]

that's a good observation. i was having problems bringing out the acoustic guitar in this track. possibly because the overall volume is too high...no sure. also, does seem a wee bit uneven in the beginning, but not sure if i want to change it.