"Monster": Vlayman & ubertar; DONE (so listen

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"Monster": Vlayman & ubertar; DONE (so listen

Post by vvv » Sun Apr 04, 2010 7:21 pm

Monster_Take1

From a percussion idear of ubertar, I started this, and invite you to add to it.

E-D-E
E-D-C#-B

Monster
c. '10 Vayman Produx
(from a drum idear of P. Rubenstein)

6
In the deep in the dark in the place where you have
no heart,
In the back in the dark in the black where it all
comes apart,
2
You have no stitches, you have no wounds, you
have no scars,
You have no dreams you make no screams as it all
comes apart,
6
You never claimed to be all together in your mind,
you never had the ability to define,
or satisfy anyone who met you of your sanity,
It's clear to all you exist only through your vanity,
In the deep in the dark in the place where you have
no heart,
In the back in the dark in the black where it all
comes apart
2
You have no stitches, you have no wounds, you
have no scars,
You have no dreams you make no screams as it all
comes apart,
2
In the deep in the dark in the place where you have
no heart,
In the back in the dark in the black where it all
comes apart
bridge
4
You have no stitches, you have no wounds, you
have no scars,
You have no dreams you make no screams as it all
comes apart,
2
In the deep in the dark in the place where you have
no heart,
In the back in the dark in the black where it all
comes apart
It all comes apart ...

Drums (pencil-eraser-tipped drumsticks, kpanlogo
drum as kick drum, doumbek, darbouka, djembe,
conga, tabla and snare, with hi-hat and three
cymbals, binaural head): Paul Rubenstein
Bass: P-T2-Microcab
Vox: AT4040-Meek
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Post by vvv » Mon Apr 05, 2010 4:43 pm

Aiight, done:

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Post by vvv » Thu Apr 08, 2010 4:52 pm

I can't believe no one wants to tell me how shite or great a <s>peenist</s> pianist I am.
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Post by ubertar » Thu Apr 08, 2010 6:32 pm

I like the piano. I'm not so crazy about the guitar, tbh.

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Post by vvv » Thu Apr 08, 2010 9:21 pm

You don't like my first take stereo guitar wankery, eh? :twisted:
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Post by Nick Sevilla » Fri Apr 09, 2010 9:00 am

I did not like the original loop.

But this I like, good Job!!!
Howling at the neighbors. Hoping they have more mic cables.

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Post by vvv » Fri Apr 09, 2010 10:25 am

Thank you. 8)

ubertar, if you wanna add or replace the guitar ...
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