This song is from my band Bright Size Life's new EP.
Get Out
I think it's brilliant, but I'm biased.
Is this good?
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Is this good?
"Badness is only spoiled goodness."
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Not my style, but the production is nice!
I think the snare could be more present. It sounds too distant to me. The ritard at 3:02 sounds kinda clumsy. Actually, on listening to it again, I think if you could line up the bass and snare that are slightly off at 3:04, it'd sound better.
Other than that, nice work.
I think the snare could be more present. It sounds too distant to me. The ritard at 3:02 sounds kinda clumsy. Actually, on listening to it again, I think if you could line up the bass and snare that are slightly off at 3:04, it'd sound better.
Other than that, nice work.
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Thanks for the kind words. Regarding the time issue mentioned, I didn't really scrutinze small details like that because I was so pleased with that take, but I could see how that would tighten it up a little. Rhodes, drums, and bass were cut live, and they nailed the grove on that one.
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good tune and decent take
Man, thats a great tune!
I agree there's a couple loose places in there but the overall take is awesome.
Good lyrics and tension building throughout with the instrumentation.
Keep it up!
Rock on!!!
I agree there's a couple loose places in there but the overall take is awesome.
Good lyrics and tension building throughout with the instrumentation.
Keep it up!
Rock on!!!
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