Is this good?

Stephen B. · Post by **Stephen B.** » Thu Dec 08, 2005 2:04 pm

This song is from my band Bright Size Life's new EP.

Get Out

I think it's brilliant, but I'm biased.

John Jeffers · Post by **John Jeffers** » Thu Dec 08, 2005 2:18 pm

Not my style, but the production is nice!

I think the snare could be more present. It sounds too distant to me. The ritard at 3:02 sounds kinda clumsy. Actually, on listening to it again, I think if you could line up the bass and snare that are slightly off at 3:04, it'd sound better.

Other than that, nice work.

MichaelAlan · Post by **MichaelAlan** » Thu Dec 08, 2005 3:42 pm

Rockin'. Plus I like the C.S. Lewis quote.

Mike

Stephen B. · Post by **Stephen B.** » Fri Dec 09, 2005 1:21 pm

Thanks for the kind words. Regarding the time issue mentioned, I didn't really scrutinze small details like that because I was so pleased with that take, but I could see how that would tighten it up a little. Rhodes, drums, and bass were cut live, and they nailed the grove on that one.

Rolff · Post by **Rolff** » Sat Dec 10, 2005 7:24 pm

Man, thats a great tune!
I agree there's a couple loose places in there but the overall take is awesome.
Good lyrics and tension building throughout with the instrumentation.
Keep it up!
Rock on!!!

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Is this good?

Is this good?

good tune and decent take

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