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write this song

Post by vvv » Thu Jun 08, 2023 7:00 pm

I mean, I'm like, it could be good:

I am an innocent man.

Let's say by June 29?

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Re: write this song

Post by KermitPickle » Fri Jun 09, 2023 8:38 am

Is this in reference to...uh...anyone in particular?

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Re: write this song

Post by vvv » Fri Jun 09, 2023 3:13 pm

If ya want.

I heard it said with some emphasis and thought it would make a good chorus lyric line, could be a interesting challenge, so, ...


... I guess I challenged. :twisted:
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Re: write this song

Post by losthighway » Sat Jun 10, 2023 7:38 am

It could be a good topical folk song with irony, unreliable narrator. The verses are just rhyming details of legal woes and the chorus just refrains "I'm an innocent man."

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Re: write this song

Post by KermitPickle » Sat Jun 10, 2023 8:54 am

Ok, fair, I'll give it a shot. Haven't written anything new in forever so this is welcome.

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Re: write this song

Post by vvv » Sat Jun 10, 2023 9:47 am

I'm just finishing up av layman 3p using my new drummer, and then I'll get attit
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Re: write this song

Post by Antler23 » Sat Jun 10, 2023 5:43 pm

Just cranked this out this morning. Bit rough and I'm not sure about the vocal 'verb, but I'll tweak the mix later...

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mQCWY5ynBaw

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Re: write this song

Post by vvv » Sun Jun 11, 2023 3:45 pm

not necessarily happen with the vocals, but I just mixed this, gorgar on drums, unmastered

https://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=14611207
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Re: write this song

Post by KermitPickle » Tue Jun 13, 2023 4:54 pm

Antler23 wrote:
Sat Jun 10, 2023 5:43 pm
Just cranked this out this morning. Bit rough and I'm not sure about the vocal 'verb, but I'll tweak the mix later...

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mQCWY5ynBaw
Ha ha ha nice.

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Re: write this song

Post by KermitPickle » Tue Jun 27, 2023 4:27 pm

Ok here's mine. I wanted to make an actual nice recording of this but I'm out of time, so here instead is a charming phone demo.

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