as long as I dont reference anything professional it sounds great.
any suggestions to make this not suck?
http://www.everybodysx.com/the_wreck.mp3
More of my cheesy hard rock
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More of my cheesy hard rock
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this is either perfect or sucks too bad to be helped?
heres an updated version
http://www.everybodysx.com/music/the_wreck.mp3
thanks
heres an updated version
http://www.everybodysx.com/music/the_wreck.mp3
thanks
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I also record and play cheesy hard rock (samples coming soon, hopefully), so I can't pass this up...
First off, I like the song!
The drums are not present enough. I'd like to hear more high end on the snare. I agree with you about the kick--it's too soft. There are a few minor timing problems in the drums, too. No big deal, but every so often I hear a kick hit that's not tight.
I dig the bass tone. The guitars are good, too. You might suck some of the mids out of the guitars. Not necessarily the "death metal scoop", but they're a bit too midrangey in my opinion. Maybe find the most offensive frequencies and notch them out?
I won't comment on the vocals since you said they're still being developed.
I think the mix as a whole needs more balls. I'm not sure what would help with that, as I'm no expert myself. But it is missing something in the lows and/or low-mids.
First off, I like the song!
The drums are not present enough. I'd like to hear more high end on the snare. I agree with you about the kick--it's too soft. There are a few minor timing problems in the drums, too. No big deal, but every so often I hear a kick hit that's not tight.
I dig the bass tone. The guitars are good, too. You might suck some of the mids out of the guitars. Not necessarily the "death metal scoop", but they're a bit too midrangey in my opinion. Maybe find the most offensive frequencies and notch them out?
I won't comment on the vocals since you said they're still being developed.
I think the mix as a whole needs more balls. I'm not sure what would help with that, as I'm no expert myself. But it is missing something in the lows and/or low-mids.
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