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jordaniusrex
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Post by jordaniusrex » Fri Jan 06, 2012 6:19 pm

A song about not recording :)

All feedback is appreciated! This song is from a record I'm in the process of making.

Mix
http://cl.ly/0d3J2h2l0j3e0I3f1T45

Ghetto master (louder)
http://cl.ly/2b1a0i0m0d433Z1X1r1j

Thanks,
Jordan

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Jitters
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Post by Jitters » Sun Jan 08, 2012 7:34 am

It's a cool song! I shouldn't have to be straining to make out the lyrics though, especially when they're that clever. Put the singer in the spotlight!

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Post by Nick Sevilla » Sun Jan 08, 2012 1:43 pm

Cool song.

Hopefully the mix will do it full justice, and give it the BALLS it deserves.

Cheers
Howling at the neighbors. Hoping they have more mic cables.

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Post by jordaniusrex » Sun Jan 08, 2012 4:51 pm

Thanks guys.

I kicked up the vocals a few dB. Here's a new version:
http://cl.ly/141v1Y2L1o1f2D183j22

Nick, do you have any suggestions for giving it some cajones?

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Post by Jitters » Sun Jan 08, 2012 5:48 pm

Yeah, that's better!

I'm not Nick, and I'm certainly not Nick, but I think you might try adding a little weight in the low end, there isn't much beef there.

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