Big H little i

[zoetrope]

Here's one I recorded a while ago and would like to redo. Suggestions for changes, improvements, etc., would be greatly appreciated.
Big H little i

[j.johnston]

It needs more high end instrumentation. A Hi Hat would help fill it out. I like the synth kick. A pad would probably smooth the song out a bit. Possibly a Rhodes. A piano would probably sound nice as well, just for sutle little segways. The drums sound like a loop that isn't quite lined up right. I like the song, it has lots of potential. Great lyrics.

[zoetrope]

Thanks for the listen and the comments, all duly noted.

[helstab]

it just needs a nice slow ride.

[eeldip]

although you might lose that fun lumbering feel to the song with a hat or a ride.

maybe some other solution? a delay on something with a nice filter on it.

oh here comes a hat.. ...


i dunno. i sort of like the mix as is... maybe louder guitar. less bass on the bass drum? less bass on the bass... this is pretty baaasssssy.

[zoetrope]

So some want more treble, some want less bass. Same thing I guess.

These comments are all very helpful. I've listened to this song so much I can't hear it anymore, but listening to it after reading other's comments, I can hear what they're hearing.

Many thanks.