Another please critique mix - shooting for a pop/blues thing

[rockstar_not]

Fellow TapeOpsters:

I'm new to TapeOp (read the last 2 issues - how can it be free?) and stumbled onto the forum today.

I just bought Tracktion software.

'Cerulean Sky' is my first track that I'm working in in Tracktion.

http://www.nowhereradio.com/artists/alb ... 36&alid=-1

Please let me know what you think.

Other comments have been centered on the bad EP detune at the beginning of the song, too deep of tremolo on EP, undefined bass, off-pitch vocals, etc.

Humble list of gear:

-2002 Fender MIM Fat Strat
-Behringer V-Amp 2 for guitar amp/cab sims and some effects
-Tracktion recording software.
-SoundBlaster Live soundcard
-CAD M-177 Large Diaphragm Condenser mic
-dbx mini pre mic preamp
-just about every free VST and VSTi that you can get from the KVR-VST site, but only a couple used on this song

-Scott

[dougo]

Try the vocals with less reverb. I think it will sit in the mix better.

Welcome aboard,
Cheers,
Dougo

[rockstar_not]

Bump:

Anyone else?

-Scott