There is a pan that happens too early which I noticed as I posted this last week. But other than that, any advice would be greatly appreciated. . .
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Please critique this mix. . .
Please critique this mix. . .
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Re: Please critique this mix. . .
Great voice there!! Now......
1) The vocal track needs to be pushed out in front a bit in spots and needs some EQ meat and body. The bass REALLY needs a push to anchor this work. A marked push. Tis' lacking noticebly.
2) Kick drum MIGHT need adjustment (amplitude/skin) in the mix when the bass line is in proper balance/amplitude. Only ears will tell when you get to this bridge.
3) Overall brittle sound here. Needs warmth and presence, notably in the gee-tar department. Waiting for any subsequent follow-ups! Great effort! ---LT
1) The vocal track needs to be pushed out in front a bit in spots and needs some EQ meat and body. The bass REALLY needs a push to anchor this work. A marked push. Tis' lacking noticebly.
2) Kick drum MIGHT need adjustment (amplitude/skin) in the mix when the bass line is in proper balance/amplitude. Only ears will tell when you get to this bridge.
3) Overall brittle sound here. Needs warmth and presence, notably in the gee-tar department. Waiting for any subsequent follow-ups! Great effort! ---LT
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Re: Please critique this mix. . .
I agree with Lee. The bass guitar is lacking the bottom end to anchor the mix. I think if you get the bass guitar in there the right way it will also balance the brittleness that Lee speaks of. Remember, this is just an opinion. I think your definately on the right track.
Re: Please critique this mix. . .
Seriously guys, thanks for the input! I was having a problem with my mixes being too muddy and I think I went a little crazy with cutting the low end on this one to get things more clear.
I appreciate the advice.
I appreciate the advice.
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Re: Please critique this mix. . .
Bass. Kick. More please. It's a loverly bass line and everbodoy is right. It would balance out that forehead tappin midrange. 3K down a little perhaps. More warmth.
Nice work.
Nice work.
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