Beautiful poem by someone in my creative writing club
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Beautiful poem by someone in my creative writing club
I'm in a Creative Writing club at my school, and unfortunately am stuck on the email list for everyone to email their poems and stories. For some odd reason I torture myself by reading most of them. Check out this classic:
Angry words fill my head, too much it can't be said.
Sorrow fills my heart, too much don't know where to start.
I want to scream, instead I cry and can't stop, don't know why.
I feel tired, yet can't sleep, if only time could stop...keep.
Things I want to say, but I am left astray.
Keeping strength and hope, yet not for long, not, nope.
Comfort I desire, yet it's put out like water to fire.
Warth would be ideal, but remains confermed closed like a stampled seal.
Waiting for the darkness to turn to light so it can be happy and bright, not to leave my site.
Deep.
Angry words fill my head, too much it can't be said.
Sorrow fills my heart, too much don't know where to start.
I want to scream, instead I cry and can't stop, don't know why.
I feel tired, yet can't sleep, if only time could stop...keep.
Things I want to say, but I am left astray.
Keeping strength and hope, yet not for long, not, nope.
Comfort I desire, yet it's put out like water to fire.
Warth would be ideal, but remains confermed closed like a stampled seal.
Waiting for the darkness to turn to light so it can be happy and bright, not to leave my site.
Deep.
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Wow. That's profound. It rhymes, as well. I wish I could write like that. Someday, someday.wing wrote:I'm in a Creative Writing club at my school, and unfortunately am stuck on the email list for everyone to email their poems and stories. For some odd reason I torture myself by reading most of them. Check out this classic:
Angry words fill my head, too much it can't be said.
Sorrow fills my heart, too much don't know where to start.
I want to scream, instead I cry and can't stop, don't know why.
I feel tired, yet can't sleep, if only time could stop...keep.
Things I want to say, but I am left astray.
Keeping strength and hope, yet not for long, not, nope.
Comfort I desire, yet it's put out like water to fire.
Warth would be ideal, but remains confermed closed like a stampled seal.
Waiting for the darkness to turn to light so it can be happy and bright, not to leave my site.
Deep.
Re: Beautiful poem by someone in my creative writing club
Damn. I'd sure like to party with that person!
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Don't ask me what "warth" and a "stampled seal" are.
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They're probably really deep words that relate to inner-children screaming, and the impaling of one's heart upon the cruel stakes formed out of rejection from one's lover.
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Thanks for tormenting us too.
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wow. that was terrible. the sad thing is that's on par with most creative writing clubs i've seen..
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I'm laughing my ass off, brilliant!Bear wrote:"... keep."
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Whoo. That's, um, something else.
When I was in high school I was <dorkalert> co-editor of the literary magazine </dorkalert> and we got dozens of submissions that were on par with this one. I really really wanted to put out a "bootleg" version of the lit mag, consisting of only this type of stuff, but the idea was shot down as being too cruel.
When I was in high school I was <dorkalert> co-editor of the literary magazine </dorkalert> and we got dozens of submissions that were on par with this one. I really really wanted to put out a "bootleg" version of the lit mag, consisting of only this type of stuff, but the idea was shot down as being too cruel.
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Please, PLEASE keep all Ovation acoustic guitars away from this person.
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*spits on monitor*psychicoctopus wrote:Please, PLEASE keep all Ovation acoustic guitars away from this person.
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I used to own one of those a time ago, and man, are they ever shite for sound.psychicoctopus wrote:Please, PLEASE keep all Ovation acoustic guitars away from this person.
"I wish I could tell you how I feel, but how do I know these feelings are real?
I glance at my crotch--*crosses out with pencil*--watch and up toward the sky and the thought of our love just makes me cry".
Hmm...that's pretty good.
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When I was in 3rd grade I had to do a poem for a school assignment, and I just copied a Shel Silverstien Poem word for word from "A Light in the Attic". I got an A.
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And everyone else for that matter. Ovations blow.psychicoctopus wrote:Please, PLEASE keep all Ovation acoustic guitars away from this person.
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